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      forbidden 发表于 5-2-2011 05:09:45 转发到朋友圈 删帖
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      本内容为网友发布信息,仅代表原作者观点,不代表本平台立场。

      因为时间比较紧,所以我几乎没有怎么改语法,基本是按照中式英语的思维直接翻译的,所以各位就不要挑我语法错误啦,嘴下留情哈,但是我还是希望你们给我些建议


      今天是2011年7月的31日的21:55分也是我发给你的这封信的第一部分。我把这个叫做追忆篇。首先是从回忆开始,我想对你说的是,虽然半年过去了,但是我的心却从始至终都没有变过,这半年的时间我依然是那么的喜欢你。我其实并没有太多的去想你,
      只是在写programming写到累的时候,不经意的想起曾经的你,
      只是在吃饭的间歇偶然想起那么开朗的你,
      只是在每晚睡觉之前留出一个小时开始去想念你。
      更只是在学习碰到有困难的时候,然后突然想起曾经的你,是如何和你一起学习的样子
      虽然是这样可是我还是想说,半年没有你的音信了你最近过的还好吗?身体是否还健康。学习紧张吗。如果太过于紧张的话有没有适度的注意休息呢?半年了经历了许多的事情,你是否变得更成熟一些了呢?在这半年时间里有没有觉得心觉得累的时候呢?还愿意不愿意我去安慰你呢?当你心觉得累的时候有没有想过找到一个地方停下来休息一下呢?长期的奔波是否已经让你觉得厌烦了呢?想不想安静的体会一下快乐简单的生活呢?

      稍微和你说一些可能可以让你停下来的理由吧:
      :当你每天在洗碗的时候愿意不愿意时常有个人会去提醒你要带手套呢,只是为了保护好你的手而已
      :当你聊天觉得累的时候有没有这样一个人愿意温柔的送上一杯充满情意的水然后轻轻的告诉你,时间好像已经很晚了是不是应该适当休息一下呢
      :当你学习遇到困难的时候,可否想让这样一个人去告诉你:你行的,因为只有这个人相信你可以做到呢?
      :当你再次聊天至深夜的时候有没有人曾经这样的告诉过你,你应该多穿些衣服呢?小心着凉之类的
      :当你再次乱发脾气的时候,有没有这样一个人会尝试着去包容你呢,而且永远都是无谓的在背后支持着你呢
      :当你内心感觉低落的时候,又有没有这样一个人愿意告诉你其实他的现实生活比你经历的更惨呢?既然他都能忍过去,你又有什么不知足的呢?
      :当你想纠结的时候,是否有这样一个人告诉了你如何可以不再纠结的活着呢?
      :当你不经意哭的时候,又是否有这样一个人会温柔的递上被他揉到软绵绵的纸,然后告诉你那是为了保护你的眼睛所做的呢?
      :当你哭过之后看到你笑的时候,又是否有这样一个人会笑得比你更灿烂呢?
      :当你不小心犯错的时候,有没有一个人会这样的小心的告诉你,是否可以稍微顾及一下别人的感受呢?
      :当你每天放学之后,又有没有这样一个人愿意去你的学校等着你接你呢?
      :当你觉得累的时候,又有没有这样一个人愿意去背着你让你感觉到轻松一些呢
      :有没有想过有这样一个人每天当你醒来的时候,总是希望第一眼见到的那个人是你呢?
      :当你睡眠不足的时候又没有这样一个人愿意去告诉你,你应该多休息休息而不是一味的学习?
      :当你感到委屈的时候,又没有这样一个人看了之后会觉得比你更伤心呢?
      :当你玩的过火的时候又没有这样一个人时刻提醒你你的首要任务应该是什么呢
      :当你想去爬山的时候,又没有这样一个人愿意永远的放弃自己手里的事情,而去陪着你呢
      :当你不经意骗到这个人的时候,又没有这样一个人,他总是告诉自己其实过错永远都是他的呢:
      :当你起床晚的时候又没有这样一个人,会每天都去叫你起床呢,然后时刻提醒着你,不可以偷懒哦?
      :当你看到一个有着冰冷外表的人的时候,又可曾想过其实他的心远比他的冰冷要热情的多呢?

      所以你需要这样的人一个在你的身边吗?永远都是时刻以你为主题?如果愿意回来的话就回来吧,因为他可能真的很希望能去照顾你。从他自身的原因来说,因为他的缺点只有你才能看到,所以某些时候他也想要变得更好,变成你那理想中的样子



      英文部分
      Love letter (part 1)。
      today is 31st of July which date that u left me.thats the first part of the whole article.

      i called this for dating back esipode.first, from memorize, i am gonna tell you is although half year passed ,my heart will go on and never changed even once.
      ,
      during half year, i still have been loving for u .actually i did not spend much time on missing u

      unless when writing programming till exhausted,then slightly thought of u

      unless during the break of the meal,then thought back how adorable you were.
      。
      unless before sleeping ,spare one hour to begin to think of u

      unless when encountering difficluties, suddenly thought back of you ,how we study together

      although like this,i still gonna say, without hearing from u for over half year,how are you recently?is that your study intense too much?

      is that means you are too tired to forget to have a rest?half year,we have been experienced many things, have you become a little bit more mature?

      during this half year,have you felt a little bit tired from your heart?still want to have someone to comfort you?

      when u feel tired, have you thought that you may have a rest in one place?

      have you sicked of long term running?Gonna want to have a simple life?


      maybe i could provide you some reason to let you have a stop
      :
      when you are washing dishes,do u want someone would aware you to wear gloves just in order to protect your hands better?
      :
      when you are chatting till tired,do you need someone who can give you a glass of water within full of love sense and suggest you that is that too late to have a rest would be better?
      :
      when you are encountering difficulties,do you want to have someone tell you that :trust yourself ,you can make it?unless only this person that you could do that
      :
      when you are chatting till midnight, do you want to have someone to remind you it is too cold ,you should better wear some thick clothes?
      :
      when you are throwing your temper, do you want to have someone tried his best to tolerant you ,and always support you from the back side?
      :
      when you are  in a gloomy moode, do you want to have someone willing to tell you that in fact his daily life was even harder than what you have experienced?if he could endure that, y not just have a try to feel happy?
      :
      when you are heisitating, do you want to have someone telling you y not try to lead with a simple lifestyle?
      :?
      when you are reluctant cryting, do you want to have someone passing his toilet paper to you within a soft tearing, and just inform you that it would be the best way to protect your eyes?
      :
      after crying ,do you want to have someone could have a shinning grin than you?
      :
      when you are making a fault, have you thought that someone would tell you carefully that ,if you dont mind can have a little concertration on others feeling?
      :
      after your class dismiss,do you want to have someone willing ot pick you up after ur class?
      :
      when you are feeling tired, do you want to have somone to make you unwind?
      :
      have you thought about there would be someone after you waking up,always want to see you at his first sight?
      :
      when you sleepness ,do you want to have someone telling you that you should have a properly rest rather than hard working on studies?
      :
      when you are feeling bad, do you want to someone that after seeing would be more sentimental than you were?
      :
      when you are catching fire, do you want to have someon awaring you that what is your priority things to do?
      :
      when you want to hike,do you want to have someone always giving up his things instead of accompanying with you
      :
      when you reluctant make a cheat, do you want to have someone telling you that all the fault should be his
      :?
      when you are getting up late, do you want to have someone awaring you that u should woke up every morning,and always tell you that you should be deligent
      :
      when you are sawing someone wears a cold shoulder,have you thought about that in fact his heart was much more passionate than his appearance?

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       楼主| forbidden 发表于 5-2-2011 16:32:47
      你们为什么就不能给我些意见呢
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      板凳
      czheng10 发表于 8-2-2011 13:26:00
      好长啊,好长
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      Jamse2010 发表于 8-2-2011 14:24:20
      too long, we like instant food, lol
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